Adieu, adieu, adieu.
To you, and you and you.
When I started writing this, my last official Doorway Writing Group blog, I was in the throes of moving and was surrounded by removal boxes and piles of bed linen and blankets. And I was so tired! All that packing and cleaning! I could have slept for a week. I never thought I would be ready. And when I came to look for the poems I wanted to feature in the blog—horror of horrors—I couldn’t find them. I was in despair. This had never happened before and I became convinced they had somehow been packed up with all the rest of my life.
Well, a few weeks later and I am relieved to report that the move went pretty smoothly and I found the poems—just where I’d put them in my laptop case. So now this blog can see the light of day and I can sign off, late but with everything present and correct. I am glad to report my last writing group was its usual interesting self. Not hugely productive but with a feeling that everything is simmering away ready to come to the boil. Most of our joint attentions lately have been taken up with preparing an anthology of all the poems and lyrics we have produced. It’s coming along, slowly but tenaciously, and I’m hoping will be ready later this year (September??) Watch this space.
Here are some recent poems from J and one from the enigmatic Z.
Sleeping Out
Pause the night!
Make the sun rise!
Senses pinched
By bone-penetrating-
Cold-breath-fogged
Stillness.
Shut-down humanity slumbers
In silence
Curtains drawn tightly against the cold
The night surprises; voices in doorways
tyres screeching; the passing of sirens.
But we’ve been here before
Just never thought I’d be back again
Me and the midnight minstrel
Pacing the streets
While the moon
Glides among the frozen stars
We are waiting for the first
Grey wash of dawn.
by J
Living on the Side of the Road
It’s a hard type of living, living on the
side of the road.
In the town or the country
living on the side of the road
nobody knows me, I’ve got no place to call my own.
Walking along just my dog and me
following footsteps just my dog and me
sharing the load and company.
Don’t know where I’m going
Can’t remember where I’ve been
but we must be going somewhere
some place I’ve never seen.
Walking along just my dog and me
following footsteps just my dog and me
sharing the load and company.
by J
Kings of Atlantis
Palm trees swaying in a hurricane
Reeds whispering in the Sargasso Sea
Tropical sunsets and the Bermuda Triangle
Nobody is missing the Kings of Atlantis.
Persecuted, the pilgrims flee their homes
Shivering children quiver in the unknown
Before the boat capsizes they lift their gaze
Before the unseeing eyes of the Kings of Atlantis
Still I hear that you made it home
To a seaweed crown, a cold basalt throne
Making a connection with the floor below
Which shifting groans, the song of Atlantis.
The coastlines crumble while the tides decide
Predict a landslide
For the Kings of Atlantis.
by J
This poem, The Kings of Atlantis, was written as a response to the murder of the MP Jo Cox. It has been suggested that the perpetrator carried out this senseless killing because he believed in the ideology of ‘Britain for the British’, a conception based on a myth, not unlike the stories of the drowned island of Atlantis or the Bermuda Triangle. The poem weaves these myths with the realty of the plight of refugees fleeing conflict in over-crowded, unseaworthy boats.
Arrival
I saw Lyonesse today
with my own eyes
Lyonesse out there
breaking the horizon
In dappled light
under wing under cloud
in plain sight
Lyonesse
setting this loose
wording the way
letting me live
Lyonesse today
You were waiting
out at sea
watching there
Lyonesse for me
for me
by Z
A mythic lost world also inspired this poem. Lyonesse is the name of a drowned world off of Land’s End, and the writer and poet Thomas Hardy used it in his writing as his name for Cornwall (as he used ‘Wessex’ for the area of the West Country his novels are set in). If you have the inclination check out Sylvia Plath’s poem, Lyonesse. It is a much more sober work that makes an acute commentary on collective mythologies, not unlike J’s Kings of Atlantis poem.
Although I have left Doorway I am pleased and relieved the writing group will carry on. In the autumn it will have a new facilitator who I am sure will give it the renewed impetus that it needs. So, three cheers for Doorway Volunteers! Three cheers for Doorway’s Staff (so they don’t feel left out). And three cheers for Doorway guests who are so inspired and inspirational.